I like the scene a lot, I could imagine the protagonist spying on the character (and bike) from behind some obstruction because of the structure on the right and the suspisious look of the biker/monster dude - however you might want to exagerate this? Maybe make a frame like obstruction around the bottom (like the silhouette of some boxes) so it's more obvious?
Thanks again for that help. I really like the idea - so I'll give it a shot. And thats good. Sometimes you got blind by your own work and if someone comes up with a great idea or just a suggestion - great! LOL!