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The concept is great, love the way it looks. As much as I don't have experience or memories of ever seeing one, this would in some form make me think of a crack house or anything of the nasty sort. Shows a place to me that has given up, or if not then forced to live in such terrible ways. Now this isn't of real society since I would have no ability to tell anyone how it truly is. Though from a standpoint of what I would believe it is, this is what I would see.
Torn rooftops, markings, everything broken or trashed... The idea of living in such a place would make people cringe, but where else would these people go? I must say though that the only thing that strikes me strange is something small. I feel as though you are making these locations feel open but emotionally suppressed. Almost as if these are locations not naturally built for expansion. Perhaps this city isn't really what I thought it was... Can I guess a form of prison or isolated unit based location? Enough... I must see more!
Lol - for sure!
you said it all well.
the city itself is the prison or as you said, a isolated unit. A certain umber of "houses" building up a unit, units will be combined to bigger units, and so on . No one who's living in knows it correctly, they have just this feeling. they know there is no way out - except criminality. Thats why gangs are a common thing there…
And be sure - you'll see more
All the best and happy holidays
and "BLOCK - HN 15 - 45"; This can either be an excellent addition of detail, or a randomly placed bit of information that came out of no where. Do these numbers and words have meaning in the T3A story? I really love this piece, the moonlight and warm-light is mixed very well here, a very good atmosphere indeed.
those type elements are kind of essential to the story. Each hut / unit is traced by the government / police (sort of). the know all about the people, their special behaviors, who's infected, etc…
every information will be stored in a huge database. But some of them know how to fool the system
Thanks again!
Best
For c/c,maybe you can give some kind of focus in the image,maybe zooming it out a little?
I'm really not qualified to crit this level of work,haha!
Played around with different camera tilts and zoomed in and out for some time, but ended up as it is.
Every crit is welcome!!!
Cheers